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In this eerie silence on a moonless night
Your eyes transcend demonic intentions
Oozing poison from your dreamy glare
Creating an atmosphere of awkward tension
Sinful thoughts creep through your mind
Obscenity crawls on your crimson lips
Your fangs glisten beneath the street light
Your venomous saliva miserly drips

The fire in your eyes burns with desire
As you hypnotise me with your dark aura
And weaken my senses with your black charm
The thirst in your throat yearns for my blood
Then you move closer to me with a fiendish grin
And I smell the pungent odour of your greed
The nearer you get, a sudden fear overcomes me
I start to fear the bite of morbidity

Yet I stand still, motionless with dread
Powerless, you’ve captured me under your control
As I fall victim to your tainted appetite
I’m moments away from my final fall
No-one can rescue me, I’m defenseless now
For I’m in the hands of a thirsty vampire
Who’s ready to suck the life from me
As I die in the arms of my executer.
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Intensely seductive!

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After reading twilight, I'm in love with vampires... :drool:

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I can't say I blame you!! I've loved them ever since my first viewing of "Lost Boys" way back when :P

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Those are some powerful images you conjure up, great wording too. :heart:

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Hmm... Has someone had a brush with the vampire LeStat?

Well done, deary.

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in love with vampires.....well you definetly make them sound intresting.
I wouldn't want to be in love with a natrually evil creature, with every cell in its body telling it to kill you so it can live. but hey thats just my opinion.

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i love how you describe the vampire

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