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Love is a subconscious gamble, with your fragile heart at stake,
To pursue its indeterminate desire, conscious or not, that it may break.

Ace, joker, queen or king? Who’s to know who will win?
In this unpredictable game of love, with players overcome by desperation,
In a game where even clever tactics fail. Win or lose? Thoughts derail.

For who’s to blame if you lose the game?
The opponent or the gambler?
The heartbreaker or the lover?

We can only ever hope to win, in this game of wishful sins.
For what we may gain, may just be the greatest fortune that can ever come into our lives.
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Love is...Shit, i can't remember...!

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A perfeição está para além do imaginário. Quem ronda o imaginário fica mais perto da perfeição.

Carlos Infante
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I like a good challenge ;) I play.

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I love this twist on romance. I'd heard that love was a gamble, but I like the words you chose to describe it!

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Tina Nordloh
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:iconsaida-freestar:
I agree with you.
You put it right.

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In Our Darkest Hour
Will You Still Care?
:iconiceyblue877:
I love it!

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you dont have to have money to be rich
:iconsanwi:
very nice.

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"Come to the center, Luke."
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Very good, I like the use of words to describe both the love and the gamble, for it is true that it is a gamble and the odds are never in your favour. I think you captured the meaning well.
Very well done once again.

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kamihito
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very indepthly vivid thoughts

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We are those who live forever, without ever knowing what tomorrow may bring. Those who seek what is impossible to find. Those that hope for what we may never obtain, peace. We are those who are cursed with an eternity of waiting...
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Wow. Really love this one. I like how you put love and gambling together. It is a gamble. There's a lot I wanna say about this, but I just don't know how to say it! But it is a profound piece.

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